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Leash Law in Effect



walking my eyes down the boulevard
I stumbled upon your red, silky underwear peaking out of dirty, baggy jeans
my eyes went wild pulling at the leash, leaping, refusing to behave
this out of control urge moved it's way to my lips and tongue

a wolf-whistle, sharp and shrill erupted!

surprised, I've never been able to whistle that loudly before
it usually comes out like a birdy tweet
startled and turning pink, you look up to see my hurried steps
as I drag my baby blues away.

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Happy Valentine's Day!

ever happened to you?

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  • Bazza
    February 17, 2007
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    Ha ha ha bloody magic and serve you right....


  • Allure of a Rose
    February 17, 2007

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    Great one, loves.
    And yes, I'd have to say the same thing's happened to me... and perhaps "many times" is the term I'd have to tack on to be completely honest.

    The red background made the white words look kinda hazy in my Never-Seen-Light-Before eyes, which only added to how much I just had to get to the next word.

    Very much enjoyed it, doll.

    -Allura

    • Thedragonisgone
      February 18, 2007
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      hello allura,
      nice to see you around again... yeah, i know what you mean...
      how's the boy?
      take care sweetie.

      • Allure of a Rose
        February 18, 2007
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        And you as well. ^^
        Much enjoyed the poem, and I'm quite happy to make you smile.
        Ah, I'm talking to him now. I didn't mean to me, I thought he wasn't on and sent a long message about various things... He came on right after which and we're having a brief chat.
        He's coming over in a bit, gotta finish some "paperwork"
        I feel so...relieved?

        Allura

    • Thedragonisgone
      February 18, 2007
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      hey hon, your comment here gave me a smile.
      glad you liked this one - go the idea while walkin my dog...
      hope you are well. take care my sweet.

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