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The Collaring

you kneel there before Me
eyes downcast
as I place the collar around your neck
you have belonged to Me for months now
this collar is a sign of that fact

W/we needed no formal ceremony
no witnesses were called to support
just a contract between Master and slave
O/our lives now inextricably linked

“do you give yourself to Me totally?” I ask
you reply that you do
“this collar signifies that you belong to Me”
I lift your chin, look into your eyes
and kiss you

Master ... slave
two people, one bond
not an everyday relationship
but a completeness that is with U/us every day

Author notes

This poem is dedicated to My slave and the love of My life, Tattboyspet.

My pet also wrote a poem about the collaring http://allpoetry.com/poem/2557106

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  • patsoldcat
    June 6, 2007
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    wow

    most would think this cruel, most think you are a creep

    all i see is your deep and wonderful love and commitment
    if all would take this simple cerimony, be it collar or ring or piercing, it is a sign of love eternal, for i know while she is yours, you are also now hers.

    you are such a beautiful person

    love and happiness to you always.
    al.


    • Tattboy silver member
      June 6, 2007
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      Thank you very much for your very kind comment.

      Yes, O/our collaring was a sign of total commitment.

      Peace.

      Tatt


  • Master Domtos rose
    March 23, 2007

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    Belated congratulations from B/both of U/us

    Master Tatt and Your pet ... W/we are B/both so very thrilled to hear of Y/your collaring. i have read both pieces of poetry, and they are a perfect duet when read together! W/we, as Y/you probably know, met in person back in September. What Y/you may not be aware of is that W/we've now met for a second time. i spent another long weekend with Master Domto at the beginning of March, which was absolutely wonderful. No collar as yet, as that is only to be a real time thing, not an online one (as Y/you can understand). O/our apologies for being so late with these warm wishes, but because i have been suffering with writer's block, and because Master is now back at work regularly (as a surveyor), W/we just haven't had a lot of time for much else than U/us. But W/we will try to drop in more regularly again and keep up with all the news.

    Serving Him eternally,
    rose


    • Tattboy silver member
      March 26, 2007
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      Thank Y/you both for the very kind words.

      W/we are both very happy and moving forward one day at a time.

      I hope Y/yu get many more chances to be together.

      Tattboy


  • SensualWhispers
    February 15, 2007
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    hmmmm...

    ... I'm not going to say a word. I stopped by because I saw your contest that a friend sent a link to me about. I don't understand bdsm and I don't understand how anyone could own anyone else. But that's not for me to say or disgrace or be rude about. I just find it awkward.. Kassie.


    • Tattboy silver member
      February 15, 2007
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      Thank you for leaving a comment on a piece that you obviously find uncomfortable

      If you are interested, you may want to read a column written by My pet which I feel really does a very good job at explaining how someone can own somebody else (and how someone can be very happy being owned).

      http://allpoetry.com/column/show/2231692

      Tattboy


  • slipperssun gold member
    February 15, 2007

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    congrats are offered to honour your collaring of your pet. may you both have many years of happiness together

    • Tattboy silver member
      February 15, 2007
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      Thank you very much! I am sure that W/we will have MANY years together

      Tatt


  • blueyez
    February 14, 2007
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    I love your poems like this giving us a bit of insight into that world!


    • Tattboy silver member
      February 14, 2007
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      Thank you for the comment. I don't write for that reason but hopefully it does give some insight

      Tatt


  • Tattboyspet
    February 14, 2007

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    *Blush*

    Thank You Master - it is BEAUTIFUL (the poem and the collar!) It is true - i belong to You and always will - Forever in Your service,


    • Tattboy silver member
      February 14, 2007
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      Thank you for being Mine My pet.

      W/we are two of the luckiest people in the world

      Your Loving Master

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