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fuck.

something deep inside of me
screams and shouts.
and kicks.
and its scaring me.

something deep inside of me screams
"you are such a fuck up.
Oh little me.
I'll make you pay"

something fucking deep inside,
is kicking.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Jake420
    July 3, 2008
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    I really liked this write. Short and to the point. I have written a few like this.


  • Hell In Harmony
    February 17, 2007
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    <3 second meaning.
    beautiful.
    emotional.


  • ParisInFlames
    February 17, 2007

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    So here's to girls who paint on smiles
    And mess up and mess around
    With the same stupid boy twice
    <3


    I wouldnt get too worried yet, but I know what it feels like so Im here if you need me.


  • sweetpearl
    February 15, 2007

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    The ending really hits you hard. It's a punch in the face ... I suppose rather than a kick in the stomach. This does kind of scare me too ... hope everything's okay.


  • Rainbow-High
    February 15, 2007
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    ummm wow.. I'm hear if you EVER need to talk <3


  • Glitter Scar
    February 15, 2007
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    OMGGG WE NEED TO TALK


  • February 14, 2007
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    dang! this is very scary!

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