I want to learn the mysteries of your heart
The desires of your soul
The lust of your body
Take me to places I’ve never been
Soul dancing together into nights
of passion and desire
Feeling your breath on my neck
Your mouth whispering words
of one syllable
Kissing me from head to toe
with lingering stops in secret places
Mold me and shape me into
that which you need
Make me yours
Be the lover that brings out
the woman inside
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Mold me...Make me yours... a very erotic and sensual message that can be interpreted in many different ways...
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Great
This is simply wonderful. Softly erotic, nothing over the top..
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Simply breathtaking!! The lover that brings out the woman's beast.
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If there was a single piece by you that I think you should be recognized for it is this one. There is so much said without too much written. You did an amazing job bringing this poem to life. It was very sexy and just an overall magnificent piece.
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GOOD WRITE
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Mmm very hot. I like it.
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Beautiful
this is truly wonderful the love felt is awesome.
ang
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wow! the devotion expressed. something missing from so many. and yet it didn't come across like a woman throwing herself at her lover and wanting to change for him. it seemed like sheer romance and wanting to be the best she can be for them both. well done.
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WOW JUST PLAN WOW
This is so steamy and emotional,you have penned a beautiful piece of new love:Be the lover that brings out the woman inside.And dont forget the beginningWOW,mysteries of your heart:desires of your soul:lust of your body,This is very good:f:f:f:f:f:f
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WOW
Now this is written in the excellence of language that this forlorned romantic can clearly understand. The diction was sheer perfection. I loved each and every line and could quote the entire write in reference as to what I like about it. This is getting a book mark. My favorite by you so far. I mean it! I LOVE IT!!!
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great write
"Be the lover that brings out; the woman inside" wow what an ending! the poem builds its way up to the point of love making. the picture also helps imagine the poem. very well written
YL
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Smokin write here!
"Take me to places I’ve never been
Soul dancing together into nights
of passion and desire"
Fantastic imagery here. Superb poem
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an expression of passion
so well done with a quiet intensity...a very appealing poem
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sexy goodness, dripping with a passion that feels so genuine, that it makes one want to[CENSORED]
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OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH..soooo sensual and lip smacking...>>>sighs..... I love ..."mold me and shape me into that which you need" and make me the woman inside...awwwwww this is sooooo beautiful....can i use that line someday.....Be the lover that brings out the woman inside...grrrrr....smoldering, sultry, hot hot hot and the pic...yeah sistah!!!
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Oh, whew, hun we have jsut got to give you a holiday....did planes fly? are they going to fly? Fly gf, that's what you need, one syllable words or not.
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