People are cruel
cruel to one another
there is one guy
he dresses darkly
so automatically hes called emo
but no one has even tried
to get to know him
he is funny and smart
people need to learn
to get to know someone
before they judge
so please
dont judge people
by their appereance
he is very special
but no one will ever
see him the way I do
please....
Dont Judge
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Seems a bit trite to me. To lesson-ish.
I like the presentation, though.
Line fourteen:
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Don't judge. What a clear and good message. I think we're all guilty of it - one way or another. I hate it when people judge me, but I do at times find myself do the same. Shame on me!
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Thank you for subjecting yourself to my review. I do like the changes that you made to this poem. I think that it is much easier to read. I still have a problem reading the font against the background that you used. I had to highlight the text to be able to red it.
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Thank you for entering my contest and good luck. I like the concept of you poem very much. I think the message that you put out with this poem is an important one. It is important not to judge people. I did have trouble reading it however. It seems to run together anfd it might be easier to read if it had somw brakes in it. You could break it into a couple of stanzas and allow the reader to take a rest. The color font you used is also very hard for me to read with the background you used. I had to highlight the poem so it was easier to read.
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this was a really great poem and truthful as well..its so true that everyone is cruel to one another nowdays this poem was very well written keep writting your very talented
~Chrissy~
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Strong message, but the form and wording is a little simple for me. You've definately have talent and with a little creativity in wording you could make this piece very impactive. Thanks for the entry in my contest.
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This is a good poem, short and sweet. The font was a little hard to read, but I liked the message. Not exactly deep, but still nice. Thank you for your wonderful entry and good luck in my contest.
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now isnt that the truth.
great write.pure and simple, the truth.
thanks for entering -
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no prob. thanx for the comment
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Very nice poem and message. I try to be less judgemental daily. Thanks for the reminder. Great Job, keep up the good work.
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