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I see you

You seem alone
cast out into the
cruel world
I see you everyday
I really see you
you test me to
see if Im like you
we like the same
music, clothes, and attitudes
We make fun of everything together
sometimes I think Im the only person
to see the real you
I will always be here
I will always see you for you
I dont compare
because theres no one
I can compare to you
So I just wanted you to know...
I see you

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  • crystallynnbradford
    April 27, 2007
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    this was pretty good..thanks for entering and best of luck eith this guy and in the contest


  • Poetic Aphrodite
    April 19, 2007
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    Thankyou for your entry, Bella


  • ddollfacek
    April 8, 2007

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    This is a good poem, and I know what it is like to kinda feel like the outcast in school. I can relate to this piece. Th only thing I had trouble with reading this piece through was:

    "you test me to
    see if Im like you"

    When I reread it, i understood it, but the first time through, it kinda ruins the flow. Maybe fix that up a little bit? Just a suggestion. =)

    Thank you for entering in my contest!


  • Lost In143
    March 5, 2007
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    This is a good poem.

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