...W...A...T...E...R...
I can feel you,
seeping through my clothing
cleansing my skin
I swim through you
you are calming and smooth
It is as if I can feel you're warmth not only on the outsides of my body
but all through me.
...F...I...R...E...
I can feel you,
burning through my skin
freeing me from my life, if only just for a moment
you are wild and unpredictable,
bright and choppy, in the best way
And only you can detiver the freeness that I need to live.
...A...I...R...
I can feel you,
blowing through my hair
sweeping the leaves into the lushs
moving the snow from place to place
The breeze that you deliver is what keeps everything in order.
...E...A...R...T...H...
I can feel you,
slipping through my hands
you are rich and norished
You are the only one who can grow plants
without you no one could survive.
Author notes
I chose option #7.
A contest entry
- OPTIONS FOR EVERYONE!!! by NooNiThEWitcH.
425 points, ended March 8, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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thats good i like it, very descriptive
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You like it?? I don't actually think that it was that good of a poem.
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This is very beautiful. I like how you mentioned all or most of the elements! Good choice of words and i like your simple ideas.
I was looking for something like this.
Thank you for writing, and entering it in my contest. Keep on writing, and good luck.
Nooni
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