I love him
he means the world to me
Or at least he did
On Valentine's Day,
he took me out to eat
and then we saw a movie
which happened to be a horror movie
I don't mind horror movies
in fact, I love them,
but when it happens
to be on your Valentine date,
it kind of doesn't work out
After the movie,
we went to his house
and he tried
to rape me
He couldn't do it
because I'm stronger,
but I killed him
He pulled out a knife and cut
my neck
and I took it
and jammed it in his heart
As he lay dying,
I stood over him
and I said,
"You'll rot in Hell
for what you did to me
for God will never let you
into Heaven."
Author notes
This is a poem sort of based on "The Bloody Valentine" by Good Charlette. It's an awesome song and my favorite one from them. I hope you like it.
Please tell me what you think
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pretty grusome write
gee....some men dont understand the things a woman wants and needs....satisfy them and they will love you forever.....pretty dark write.....but please dont kill me...... you should enter your poems in contest....get some cups for your mantel...girl
Hugs....ohh make the font white or more ledgeable
big bro
Mal
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I could never kill you because you mean too much to me. Men don't understand anything, do they? I don't know, but sometimes I wander exactly what a man understands. I'm working on a contest right now and in fact, since the last time we talked, I enetered about 3 or 4 contests at least. As for the font, um, I'll put it white. Does the blue not work real well? I thought it did, but I'll put white.
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