I’m so irate
You think you can control me
This is real
Leave the past behind
You keep bringing up shit
From another time
Fuck that
This is now
How do you fucking
Live knowing you
Do this shit to me
You think you deserve an apology
You’ve got life fucked up
I don’t owe you shit
I mean that from the pit
Of my soul
You threaten me
You’re going to put me in jail
Go right fucking ahead
Couldn’t be any worse
I’m already living in hell
Verse after verse
I write how much
I hate you
Do you think my shit is
Symbolic
That I write metaphors
You’re wrong
I don’t sugarcoat
I don’t hide anything
I’m a real person
With real feelings
That you cant hurt anymore
I’m sick of your shit
I fucking quit
So now when
You read this
I hope you
Get pissed
Hope this is a clue
Of how much
I fucking
Hate you
Please tell me what you think
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Apparently you were angry ...
when you wrote this. Yes, it's raw. I'm not sure it's true. That's the problem with this kind of emotive writing. We are so much more than our emotions. so,it's hard to know what's really going on here. Anyway, thanks for creating this and sharing it. Warm regards, Sultan
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This is amazing
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this poem gets right to the point and i hope it proved it to who ever you wrote it to-about
<3
blue
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awesomely great!
wow. this is really great. its full of...everything. i dunno. but i like this alot!
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awesome! i loved this poem, very well written and so full of emotion. great job. thank you for stopping by my page
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nice!! :-) i fell the same way!
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wow. I know how you feel... I really really like the part....
Do you think my shit is
Symbolic
That I write metaphors
You’re wrong
I don’t sugarcoat
I don’t hide anything
I’m a real person
With real feelings
That you cant hurt anymore
I’m sick of your shit
I fucking quit
This piece is so amazing, talk about straight up raw emotion... I write like this sometimes too, but somehow I always end up feeling like a bitch and regretting it a little bit. I'm weak though.... Oh well, Pain is only a pulse, if you just stop feeling. Maybe one day when we've bled all our emotion out on paper, we just won't feel it anymore. xoxoxo Shonda
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