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another friend gone

i have recently learned
i have lost a dear friend
but his memory will be with me
till my very end

no words can describe
how i feel right now
i hope i can go on
someday, somehow

whenever i was down
he would make me smile
i wish i could have talked to him
just for a while

i can't believe
this is happening again
i can't believe
i have lost another friend

whenever i fell
he would catch me when i fall
now i can just see myself in my room
and starting to bawl

he will not be forgotten
through my eyes
i will remember memories
through the tears i cry

i will always remember him
while he is gone
keeping his memory in my heart
will keep me going strong

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  • ScArLeM
    May 9, 2007
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    wow this is a beautiful poem


  • Twilight Walker
    February 16, 2007

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    well i'm spechless now...i don't wanna say nothing because i don't wanna hurt you...i'm sorry...you said it...none words can describe how you feel right now....this is a personal route that you have to walk alone, without people saying unable words to console... you know how to lessen the pain after this you can speak to me i'll be here unluckily for you heh...good luck

    • heartofpainfultears
      February 16, 2007
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      thanks i appriciate your words.......this is a path i have to walk alone but it is good to have people to talk to

  • NickRudlong
    February 16, 2007

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    This was a very good write dear. I liked the way you rhymed it all, and still were able to touch the heart. I'm really sorry that you have to deal with this and I wish that I could help. Just know that I'm here for you. I really liked the last few lines because I know that the memories of lost loved ones will always be near and we will in later times be able to draw strength from good memories. I hope all works out for you. keep up the great writes! Te Quiero -Nick


  • Gay-Militant
    February 16, 2007
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    i'm sooooooo sorry hunny! but at leastyou are approaching this from a perspective of learning to cope, rather than digging up inside yourself. Haul ass in getting better hun. if you ever need help, i'm here!


  • Nephlim
    February 14, 2007
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    This poem seems a lot like the first one, though probably a different death, yet the same determination to grow stronger with tragedy and not let it tear you apart
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly
    p.s.: sowwy


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 14, 2007
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    This is so sad - but your sentiments are well expressed in these lines - easy to read and understand the way you feel about the loss of this friend. Life is not always easy, and the memories you have of him, good ones, will be with you always. Remember the good times and keep smiling.

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