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    i never was enamored
    with valentines shit
    and don't give me any chocolate-

    i'm not eating
    until i see him again
    until my other needs are met






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  • PalmettoSky
    February 14, 2007

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    WONDEFUL! This is so amazing and stunning.
    This is absolutely beautiful, Very well thought out and polished to high perfection. Brilliant piece my friend! loved the form and flow and the rhythm and rhyme are dead on. Captivating piece from start to finish. Don't put down that pen! I love this so much. Keep up the killer work, take care and good luck.