My spirit is here,
I'm not gone, passion
for life, I carry on.
Walking the road, often
stopping by,don't believe in
death and all its lies. In these
magic hours as you tribute this
to me, I smile, and thank you
for love has set me free. Remembering,
what I achieved, forgetting
my darkest deeds...I carry on.
I carry on, Love...
Brandon Lee.
Author notes
Brandon Lee, thanks you for this tribute!
A contest entry
- The Crow by February Moon.
600 points, ended March 13, 2007, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful tribute to Brandon Lee. His life was too short.
DEZ
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this is truely beautiful.
perfect in respect to brandon lee.x -
NAWR
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This is a great write Lavender...........I think you did really well with this. Excellent.
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This is a beautiful tribute to as wonderful a person as Brandon Lee. Thank you for taking inspiration from the picture by looking past the picture itself, and into the soul of it. You have some truly profound lines in this poem. Best of luck in my contest.
Chelsea
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thank you so much. I always had great admiration for Brandon.
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very nice poem that picture is freaking awsome!! very fluent and just allaround good write
~!~keep writing~!~
~marin~
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