"It can't rain all the time"
Occasionally the sun must shine
To change the dismal to sublime
"It can't rain all the time"
For if it did would be a crime
And I'd be ever saturnine
"It can't rain all the time"
Occasionally the sun must shine.
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- The Crow by February Moon.
600 points, ended March 13, 2007, 12 entries
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Excellent job with this. I moved from Ca, to OR and it nearly rained for two months solid. I would wake up to the rain and just cry. I have learned to really appreciate the sun in the winter. Keep up the good writes.
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I really enjoy this. You did a great job with taking inspiration from the lyrics. Error in the forth line. I'm sure you mean time, not tme. Best of luck in my contest.
Chelsea
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