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a Littel Girl

Ther was a girl owh was a slave her dad die wen he trind to save
his wife and heis stop donter wen he did her mom got eveytag evenne she did dishes, wash-windownes , sh wepflor, did eveytag
sshe was fond preens was haven a ball she whated to go but her
stapmom thont her no that she hand worke to do thay laft at he
a women came to her she sind wast a mader fend o good she had a
driss and class, slepers , she sind taks a lodt dut you mut be
back befor12:00 clooke she came back ther soon back ther he sind
he will find he he cam to her hous he trind it on he sistrers it
did not fitthem sone tind her it find he marid her and lett evey
after.

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  • Inside and out
    February 25, 2007

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    This is a clever story that you are attempting to tell. I would suggest running it through the spell check so that your story can be told without distraction.