Pure enigma-
No beginning or end,
A father entrusted
His son He did send,
Royal life submitted
From a virgin He was born,
A remittance for our sin
Detested and scorned.
And Sin's worst fear
Became Death's demise,
As God's perfect plan
Was finally realized.
In a list
A contest entry
- Good poets wanted by clulesgamdgirl.
340 points, ended March 3, 2007, 16 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautifully done!
And what a wonderful plan it was and is!
I love this!
Thank you so much for sharing this!
Bravo! -
bellisimo
Wonderful way of writing about God and Jesus' birth; this was a welcome relief from the poems I've seen lately (of a religious nature), especially since this was
a. well-done and
b. from a Christian's perspective.
I would change only one thing - "from a virgin he was born" to "from a virgin born", because that flows a bit better.
Nicely done and thanks for entering!!!
gracie
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From cluesgamdgirl on The Grand Design
Thank you, I shall consider your suggestion.
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