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Notice

Did you ever even notice
the way I looked at you?
Like you were everything
everything I could ever need?

Did you ever even notice
the way I said your name?
Like you were a god
god of my whole world?

Did you ever even notice
the little notes I left you?
Like you were all I ever thought about
about what I thought of you?

Did you ever even notice
the way I said I love you?
Like I could never love another
another the way I loved you?

Did you ever even notice
the way I was always there?
Like no matter what happened
happened with me there for you?

Did you ever even notice
that I could tell something was going on?
Like I could read you
you and all your lies?

Did you even notice
that I was holding back the tears?
Like I would never let you see
see me cry?

Did you even notice
that I noticed?

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  • x CheepPurfume
    February 16, 2007

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    Aaaaw. Honey bunny. This was so adoreable. I'm sorry that you seem to be upset. but You know that I love you dearly, and if you need anything to come to me. Butwonderful write!

    Tori