Hello! my name is HERSHEY, and I am a JOLLY RANCHER.
I am in love with BABY RUTH; she is one of my PLANTERS.
When we have a FAST BREAK, she steals a HERSHEY KISS.
She says its GOOD & PLENTY, MY BIGHUNK I did miss.
She is my HOT TAMALE, and I her TOOTSIE POP.
We go dancing at the RITZ, where this ole POP ROCKS!
I’m the SUGAR DADDY, she’s my SWEETTART.
No matter NOW OR LATER, she’ll give me her CRAZY HEART.
Our love flows like CAMPBELL’S soup, all through the MILKY WAY.
I spread my LUCKY CHARM, and now for me PAY DAY!
Author notes
goalsv
A contest entry
- Love Poems with Product Names by Melodies.
450 points, ended February 14, 2007, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Candy-Licious!! by Phoenix-Flame.
320 points, ended March 30, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter this contest or else! by MissAnonymous.
600 points, ended May 14, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - give me some of your funny poems! please! by TwiztidMaggot.
325 points, ended June 28, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your 'Gold' Is All The Rage by 2lullabyhaven.
650 points, ended November 5, 2008, 25 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You sure know how to wake up my sweet-tooth! Congrats on your trophy case for this one alone!
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I loved this poem veryyyyyy nice.funny too.
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How did I miss this one, Z? hahhaa wow, you're multi-talented, aren't you? Thanks for this entry into my contest and good luck with it
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It's a sweet poem. The use of candy brands is something I've never seen. The flow is nice and the rhyming too.
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This was creative putting names of stuff into the poem... And you still managed to tell a story... propz to you, that must be hard to do... thank you for entering and good luck.
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Thbbbbbbbbbbb. This is just way to funny. I absolutely LOVE it.
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Thank you, Glad you liked it!
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how clever! wonderful write, with well deserved trophies
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Thank you very much!
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lol
good job! I really like it! thanks for joining this contest! lol. and good luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this poem!
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Thank you!
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This piece was very unique and offered an abstract look at candy bars/food products. I found it to be creative, romantic, and hilarious. Yuor words flowed together well and your thoughts were completed, making the whole poem about food for thought. Well, thanks for your entry, keep up the great work, good luck in the contest, and thanks for sharing!
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very cute! thank you for entering!
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this silly and goofy poem will put a smile on anyones face. thanks for entering and best if luck in the contest.
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HeeHee
this made me smile.
im in school so that's an amazing feat to accomplish.
job well done, job well done.
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Thank you, Glad you liked it!
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thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this fun write using lots of brand names although as i am fron the uk i do not recognise as many as most would, great fun write though
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Thank's, I just had fun with it!
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This is just mad. I like your rhyming scheme. Keep writing, Meggh xxxxxxxxxxxx
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Thank you!
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Sweet
a very sweet tasty treat...Wonderful story making me want more...Great imagination you got going on there...Loved it...
Good Luck in the contest
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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Thank you! Glad you liked it!
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Very clever....and congrats
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Thank you for the congrats and applause!
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haha! cute cute! this very creative!I havnt heard of some of the names but o well. goodluck!
<333Elhe93<333
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Thank you!
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Crazily Great!!!
you are really good in this poem. I liked how you kind of gave different candies human features(in a way i don't know what i am talking about but oh well) expect some kind of prize in this contest -
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Thank you, I really had fun writing it!
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Oh this is Brilliant! Need i say more! Well deserved shiney thing for you!
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Thank you very much!
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A very clever use of all those brand names!!! That was just excellent!!! So very original...
Azlyn
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Thank you for the positive comments and applause.
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haha. thats awesome. i really like it!! :-D!!
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Thank's, my kind of imagination I guess.
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I love this! one of my friends has a poem similar to this on his wall with actual wrappers from candy bars. this is good and it made me smile!
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Thanks, it was really fun to write.
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Can you see my big smile???
Laughing and thinking that this poem is super dooper clever and oh so funny! You really thought this one out well to get all those candies and even a soup in there! Thank you for making me so happy and appreciative! 
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Thank you for your comments, and I am glad it could make you smile, I had a lot of fun writing it.
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A sweet write...
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you are so creative. this is hilarious! i didn't realize you were a symphony! great job here. i love this! keep writing brother. you are so delicious! God bless you
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Thank you. Sometimes a contest comes along that is right up my alley. My wife worries about me sometimes.
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This is very good, funny as well this poem is a little different using product names thats neat. Your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem good luck in the contest
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Thank you for your wonderful coments, thank you for the luck!
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Excellent use of so many brand names for this fun contest! I got a laugh out of reading it, for sure!
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Rather clever- I enjoyed this, which I should not have done, as it is in direct competition with mine............however, well done on your creativity.....a lot of these names I don't know, I am a Brit....I do have the net...mebbe I'll look 'em up!
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Thank you for your comments, this was kind of fun.
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that was hilarious! i loved it. you are very creative in your use of all these candies. great job. good luck in the contest.
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Thank you very much, I had a lot of fun with it.
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