When your whole world is falling down
When in your tears you just might drown
I'm with you
When outside it's cold, inside your lonely
When it feels like you're the only
I'm with you
Don't let these people make you sad
Inside, you know, you should feel glad
I'm with you
I'm not with anyone else
I'm with you
And I always will be
A contest entry
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Wow this is Beautiful thanxx for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck
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Beautiful and touching, a treasure to read! Thanks for entering & best of luck
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This is very beautiful! Thank you for your loving kind words of support for my sister ... you have truely sad so much in just a few words ... and it's such a powerful piece ... beautifully penned my dear ... thank you so much for your entry and good luck in the contest ... I'm sure she will love this
Chantelle -
God Kay I don't know where I'd be without you *hugs*
I love this poem... I wish I could write like you...
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Commitment is a beautiful thing. Your message was clear. enjoyed it.
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This was such a sweet piece. It is hard to remember that people love you when you the one that is being tormented by all that life has to offer. If only we had you there to hand us this piece, life would be much better.
Despair
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