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Bloody Valentine

My bloody valentine
See how your love bleeds within me?
Your crimson red
Tricking down my skin?
Your sweet pain
How lovely
Pain without love
Fake plastic love
Is what all describes the two of us

You’re the blade
That makes me happy
Your red is the seed of our love
Your pain
This the happiness that fills my world

To my lovely blood valentine
Your self destructive
But I can't stop
I have to have this happiness
But, I'm tied of lying
When there's a new slash upon my wrist

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About my little cutting habit

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  • February 21, 2007
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    that's bomb

    i like it . i thought that it was very awsome


  • i miss you...
    February 17, 2007
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    Hey,

    Hey, I do like this poem, but reading it a second time, I like it even more,
    Great Job,


  • Sunday Rain
    February 14, 2007
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    Wow,

    Wow, I honestly can, relate to this poem, but mainly I can feel the emotion, no real spelling problems, I like your bg, and it stayed on the topic of valentine's day... It wasn't too long, and it wasn't too short, great job,
    and Good LUCK!!!

  • Chunky Monkey
    February 14, 2007
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    great

    Nice Gob! Good thinking.
    Well i'm sorry that I wrote little but have to go!

  • darkeningangel
    February 14, 2007
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    awww this is so sad and meaningful i adore this poem

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