My son
You are my life
I live each and every
Day for you
Now that she took you
My enlightening jewel
My days are lonly
I can only think of you
I love You
I miss you
My baby boy
Please tell me what you think
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Nice Dedication
Once again, you have torn my heart with your sadness. I like how you can put the first and last line together, and have a sweet line in itself! As a matter of fact...Check this out:
My son, my baby boy
You are my life, I miss you
I live each and every day for you, I love you
Now that she took you, I can only think of you
My enlightening jewel, my days are lonely.
Cool, right? I put the first line with the last, second with second last...and so on.
YOu have a poem, within your poem!!
p.s. you forgot "E" in lonly.
*R
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Awww...
Adorable. I like how you ended this poem it shows how you love this child. Great work. Keep it coming. Good luck in the future.
-AkaBaki
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