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Snowball Fight

Slim pickings today for the snowball fight-
But everyone left wants to play.
The others have left for their warm, fiery houses,
No longer engaged in the fray.
Frostbit, the others fight on, never ceasing -
Passers-by under constant retreat -
At long last the children run home for their supper
As the snow melts under their feet.

Author notes

this has a double meaning, if you can pick up on it.

gracie

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  • miny me
    February 19, 2007
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    nice

    i love it

  • miny me
    February 19, 2007
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    nice

    i love the poem perfect

  • Pietro456
    February 15, 2007
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    chulesgamdgirl,

    I really enjoyed you're poem. It took me back to when I was a little boy and we used to have snowball fights with our pals on the street. We would get into two teams and we would build forts and everything. Thanks for the ride om the Memory Train today, I appreciate it.