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My Horse

  My horse is pretty, short and stout,
He likes to ride around with his head straight out.
I like to ride him all around,
Riding him makes me feel wind bound.
Running up and down a hill,
Riding past a big old mill.


My horse is white and brown,
He is trying  to be a clown.
Whinnying like an opera singer,
Telling her where to go with just a flick of the finger.
Riding past a big old tree,
Riding makes me feel so free!

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  • Inside and out
    February 25, 2007

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    This poem about your horse is indeed happy and uplifting. It brings a smile to my face as I read each line. Good luck in the contest.


  • FifthDove
    February 20, 2007

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    Your horse sounds like it is a freedom escape for you, how lovely it would be to feel this way about riding. Nice work on this piece Thank you very much for sharing your words with all of us here. I would like to take this opportunity to welcome you to Allpoetry. Being new to a site you may have a few questions or concerns, so please feel free to ask any greeter online or through the help desk at the top of the pageDove


  • Gasp
    February 14, 2007

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    lol cute..i loved it, im guessing you love toride horses lol. good job finding the allpoetry site lol