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Valentine's Day - (Acrostic poem)

Violet roses turn crimson red,
Above the bliss that is given upon.
Love that is gift upon the starry nights,
Enlighten the night with a candle dinner of two.
Nightshift from dawn that is upon us all,
Twilight the years the love we have all.
Intrigue by faces, with beauty that sets in our hearts,
Nothing less than a temporarily kiss upon thy lips.
Each day forge a playful scorn of light
Since a year you will spend together
Dreaming back towards the pass, in
All the years that bonded so fast
Yet knowingly, you will find true love.

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  • allfayth
    February 15, 2007
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    Very lovely

    Beutiful poem. Keep it up


    • Calamity Soul
      February 15, 2007
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      Aww...thank you for your time in reading and commenting. ^_^

      I shall try to keep it up, as I would hope you do as well.


  • Gasp
    February 14, 2007

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    i like this poem alot, it has very nice flow and its very true i loved the lines "Nightshift from dawn that is upon us all,
    Twilight the years the love we have all."

    ~!~keep writing~!~

    ~marin~