My Valentine
My valentines wish to my future wife
Tis with you I’ve chosen to spend my life
I love you more than words can say
Ever since the eve of that Wednesday
I love you more with each day that passes
And no, I don’t need new eye glasses
To you I’ve pledged myself to death
Its you I will love till my dying breath
I loved you when sadly we strayed apart
I love you with every beat of my heart
You’re the one that completes me
It’s with you that I truly want to be
I count my blessings every day
My love, this is what I have to say
Thank you for being part of my life
Thank you for choosing me as your wife
Our love has conquered through it all
Together we have learnt to stand tall
To grow old with you is what I wish
Till the day one of us should perish
I pledge my heart and life to you
I know our love is blessed and true
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Good luck
Well now it's legal to get married. I wish you both all the love and luck you will need to make your marriage work.
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Nice
This is a sweet poem. The flow seems a little off, but maybe that's just me. It just sounds a little forced, but hey, so does alot of my shit. Overall, not a bad poem. -
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thank you for your reading and commenting jeb, i appreciate it.
ang
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Any reason this poem is posted twice.
Wednesday seems to be the day of love for you!
Good write, although your rhyme has been better -
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you cant post things twice?!?!?!? this was written for Kathy from my heart so i dont actually give a shit what anyone else thinks!
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I didn't question the sentiment, all I said it wasn't your best rhyming effort. Not a critism just an observation. i know it was written for Kathy and I never questioned what was said. Just coz you got a bee in your bonnet don't take it out on me.
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The rhyming seems a tad forced, and besides that, where it isn't, it's pretty mundane, the rhymes themselves and the AABBCCDD etc... form that you put them in. Good plot/content though. In some places word choice was a bit bland.
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Thank you for your honest critique (sp), it is greatly appreciated. rhyming is not my strong point (as im sure you can see
) but at least i try.
This was written from my heart for my g/friend and not for any other reason.
thanks for reading and commenting
ang
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sweet
this is a very good poem its really sweet.... i hope you have a great v-day and u two last n make it through all the bull along the way. -
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thank you for reading and commenting MoreThanYouSee, we have come a long way and stuck through it together, so i believe we will make through a lot more
ang
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very nice!
perfect poetry! this is what so many people believe poetry is all about. thank you for sharing it on this Valentine's Day. peace to you always! Happy Valentine's day! peace & love, Kendal
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thank you for reading and commenting kendalpalmer, i truly appreciate it. This was written for my g/friend who i love very much (as if you could not pick that up LOL)
thank you once again.
ang
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To the point from beginning to end. A real Valentines wish from the very depths of your heart.
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thank you maro, your comments are always appreciated.
ang
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Awwwww
I love valentines day,
this is sweet and loving
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thank you Lexie
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