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The Milky Way

We rotate round the sun
As it journeys the milkyway
Around we go
26,000 years

Who or what is out there waiting
For us to pass them by
Legends of the past
Visitors of long lost nights

Are they the Vampires
Gods of ole, leperchans
Maybe the Mayans
Or have they come at all

The answer is in history
It tells of objects in the sky
The mystery of the ancients
Are still waiting to be told

Author notes

What if we have been visited already, We have several advanced civilization all over the word, Each with advancements that don't seem to fit. What if it takes 300, 500, 13,000 years for other worlds to get close enough to travel to us, What if they are very advace, God like to us. What if.

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  • Inside and out
    February 15, 2007

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    hmmm...another poem that makes one think. I do believe that we have visited already. After all, we are eternal spirits. I believe that we have all been there and done that. Well done dear poet.


  • debilynn gold member
    February 14, 2007

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    an excellent write. but gee, charlie, you have been asking an awful lot of hard questions lately. the answer is...only God knows. keep writing dear friend. God bless you

  • June-bug
    February 14, 2007

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    excellent

    Wonderful Charlie, fancinating is the history of the world and the stories of these ancient civilations. I love history and as we dive in, it is like a world of fantascy as the mind tries to form and comprehend. Like you say are there those that are so advanced that they are like Gods to us. Maybe those who have learned to use the full capacity of the brain. Wonderful write. Very thought provoking.


  • gullionmar
    February 14, 2007
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    how true how true ,somewere someday we mat know but only thru god


  • blueyez
    February 14, 2007

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    yeah what if I so loved this write and I honestly think it's one of your best. It leaves the reader wondering and contemplating!

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