Remember my dear when you were mine
The roses you gave me on Valentine
The kisses that flowed all around the year
Millions of times you said "I love you my dear"
The sunsets we spilled on the blissful meadows
The sunrise we hiked following our shadows
Do you still remember my favourite song we'd sing
The lyrics that meant we were together everything
The joys we shared inspite of tears in your eyes
What more than life could I give as sacrifice
Tho' now you are among the angels in heaven so high
I still wait on the park bench if you just passed by
Just may be I could catch the glimpse of your face
So I wake up next morning to come back to this place
Sunny-
Author notes
For the love that cannot die...
Male...
A contest entry
- Love Me To The Death by NicotineHeartbreak.
700 points, ended February 14, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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congratulations on a well desrved golden trophy for this beautiful and very sad write
an exelent peice my dear son
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wowwwwwwwwwwwww! this jus touched the heart.
This is a VERY good poem and i really liked it alot.
Well done and keep up th excellent work!
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wow. this is soo well done. i felt every pain in this poem. it's just amazing Congrats on winning you deserve it!!
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Shivering
Shivers down my spine. Especially the last 4 ligns. Congrats fellow winner. You deserve first place. -
congratulations on gold for this beautiful write
exelent work as usual sunny
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short and sweet.... pretty amazing! i looove it sooo much! keep it up!
lotsa cheers,
-martha laura-
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tear jerking
what a gorgeous piece you have completed. everyone can have a sappy moment. this had beautiful rythm to it and flowed very well and wow. ...a home hitter in some cases. very powerful. .good luck in the contest.
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An excellent entry, just the kind I was looking for. Thank you, and I'm sorry you experienced this.
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wow, this is good, i think you have something here that many wish form you expressed and captured it well, keep it flowing
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