Once entranced by your love so deep
Smelling her perfume I begin to weep
Arms tingle and blood runs fast
Squeezing you tight, knowing it will be our last
Head spins as accusations ignite
Voices raising ready for the fight
Your corrupt lies are now exposed
I can still smell the bitch on your cloths
What am I to you, a contingincy plan?
If your whore doesn't work you'd love me again?
Living your lies in my own dillusions
You started this game, I have your conclusion
Stop it! stop it! I can take any more
your not sorry, go love your whore
Leave me here, you never cared
I was loving a man that was never there
The door slams as I colapse to the floor
Screaming out I can't do this any more
Alone, the Room darkens and begins to close in
alone and broken, never to love again
Author notes
let me know how you realy feel.
A contest entry
- Show me pure loneliness and pain by ThunderCatWonder08.
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Comments
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Wow, this is beautiful. It flows very well and tells a very amazing but yet sad story through words. The rhyme is very well done. This is sure a poem to be proud of. Very well written, to say in the least. :)
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Sad.I know the feweling, you are not alone, I promise. Some guys just can't be faithful.
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this is blunt i like that too the point
Great fucking job you tell him lol he cheats he not worth it all everygurl deserves a great guy even u he one that fucked up u didnt great write * xx thunder -
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Thanks. I was getting inspiration from past experences. I wasn't sure were this was going to go till I was done with it. I appreciate the comment. I did a great fucking job lol
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