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Unvalentine's Day

Here I sit all alone
Knowing what I've always known
Knowing that you don't love me
Knowing we would never be.

 

The day to Love and be adored
Another heartache leaves me floored
Valentines and chocolate hearts
Lovers' charms and brand new starts.

 

Lovely things that I won't see
Things that weren't meant for me
Again unworthy and full of tears
Again realizing all my fears.
 

Knowing I would be alone
Wishing that my heart was stone
So many tears my eyes have cried
So much hurt I wish I died.
 

So many times I tried to see
All the things not meant to be
So on this day I'm solitary
I leave my life so voluntary.
 

When will my heart learn to see?
Inside this life I've just got me

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  • SuicidalDownfall
    July 25, 2007

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    I agree Valentines Day sucks

    and yet you capture the sadness ... its loveley, and emotional and "WONDEROUS" !! lol I will come back and read V-Day and cry until the next day !!


  • Keeper Of Peace
    February 28, 2007

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    Nawwwwwwwwwwwwww. Dont worry there will be a day that will be your best day EVER trust me ive waited 17 years and finally im happy

    Peace and Harmony,


    KoP


  • Angel With No Halo
    February 16, 2007
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  • DreamProwler
    February 16, 2007
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    I LOVE U, I LOVE, U I LOVE,more and more, I know that can't ever be enough. But PLEASE.... don't be sad Not over some HALLMARK HOLIDAY! I adore and admire u EVERYDAY. YOUR A TALENTED, BEAUTIFUL, CHARISMATIC GODDESS. No mortal is worthy.

  • Angel With No Halo
    February 16, 2007

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    What a great message to portray here. I really liked this write. The rhyme was well done and the rhythm was very good too. Thank you for entering and good luck to you!!

    ~Krys~


  • TallDrinkofWater
    February 14, 2007

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    Excellent

    Your are not unworthy of love, Men are fools and you just have to learn to except that, I too know this feeling, Write on poet


  • Tattboy silver member
    February 14, 2007
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    This is a sad but wonderful poem.

    How many people who are alone have felt "Again unworthy and full of tears Again realizing all my fears."

    Being alone does not mean that you are unworthy just that the person (people) who could appreciate your worth haven't met you yet.

    Peace

    D


  • Rianna Bear
    February 14, 2007

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    Nicely done!

    Despite the fact that I now feel miserable ( ) I really appreciate the emotions involved here. This stood out to me, my fav part: "Knowing I would be alone
    Wishing that my heart was stone." We have all had moments like these when we just know it would be easier to not feel-be of stone, than to go through such heart ache. you know, whoever made that saying: "better to have loved and lost, than to have not loved at all" was a fool! Pessimistic, sobeit!...It hurts damnit!

    Loved it!
    *R


  • Amera gold member
    February 14, 2007

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    awww... *hug* I'm so sorry. I'm alone too, lets get drunk together. Great  piece


  • lostinawe.
    February 13, 2007
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    lol....

    I really hope your life is not as the poem above....
    I hope your valentines day is a wonderful experience...
    Your writings are amazing...
    Are you published, or have any want to be so?
    If things go bad....you can be my valentine....lol
    take care...
    Peace and love,
    Matt


  • lostinawe.
    February 13, 2007
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    This is awesome and sad...


  • Andi. gold member
    February 13, 2007
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    GO SARA!!! thats my strong willed beautiful sarabear!
    u know u can make it on ur own
    find ur path, and dont look back!

    luv always dani
    P.S. happy valentines day
    u gotta know ur loved by me at least! ALWAYS!

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