My name is Lil’ Ro,
And I’m here to stay.
I’m a crazy white bitch,
So get outta my way.
You really don’t know me,
If ya callin my bluff.
You may not know it,
But I know my stuff.
I tell it how it is,
And I play no games.
No man can put me down,
Or lay a claim.
So go on yappin,
Its all hot air.
Cause I’m a senior now,
And I don’t have to care.
I’m from no ghetto
No hood or gang
I’m from Whitewright
And thats all I can say.
I’m happy-go-lucky,
And I’m always smillin.
The guys up North,
Think I’m mesmerizing.
So don’t judge me,
By the color of my skin.
Cause you don’t know,
When I’m cashin in.
So consider this,
When you see me strollin.
I’ll be moving up,
When yall be fallin.
Author notes
lol...i had fun writing this and i hope you enjoy it. It wasn't supposed to be seriouse it was ment to be funny.I'm a white girl and i know i cant rap lol i had fun writing it though it was different.
abcb
A contest entry
- yo are you a RAPPER? by XxFollowHIMxX.
450 points, ended February 18, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Rhyme Time by Kevan.
390 points, ended March 3, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hahaha, funny rap!
Everything's good. This aint no crap!
Thanks for entering in my contest!
You are now a finalist!
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Gah!
I love it. Letting the world know how you do it. Great write. It cheered me up lotz.
-Lucas
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haha. this was fun. no worries i cant rap either. but i do like poems that ryhme so thats why i did this contest. because raps have great flow.
uhm ha ok. so this was funny, i liked it. at first im like, uhmm ok this is this supposed to be like a deep message? and then i saw your author note and im like OHH OK it was meant to be funny haha thank goodness. im glad you had fun writing it. it was also fun to read. thank you for entering my conest.
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lol..yeah. oh was this supposed to be a deep message rap? i didn't see that on the contest page. I thought it was just to make a rap. NEkinda i didn't think it had to be a deep message one. I'm glade you liked it though. thanks for the comment.
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oh thats ok! i don't mind at all. it was good to great a break and read somtehing fun!
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Well i'm happy to oblige. lol
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lol. Yup I did
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OMG! LOL
I love it, it rocks -
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Lol yeah i thought you would like this one. It was fun writing it.
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Best one I've read yet...
(other than mebbe mines!) Some of the other entries are a little more thought provoking perhaps, but that's not what rap is about. This entry has attitude and rhythm and should be an easy choice to place.
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wow...i appreciate the encouragement. i'll have to check yours out then seeing that you put me in the same class as you lol...thank your for your comment..
Ro
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hahahahahaha!
Really enjoyed, I like the southern lilt ( or is that how rappers sound?) which anyway it's fun! good write. WASP.
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lol thanks i'm really happy that you liked it.
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Good
I thought this was well-written. You rhymed everything very well, and you had good flow. You did, however, spell one thing wrong. I think you should spell 'that' in line 20 'that's'. Other then that, bravo.
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Ooops!
oh thanks for the tip.
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lol. Oh wow I love your intro. Nice write/rap there.
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lol yeah thanks...i had fun writing this..i had a friend read it and they couldn't stop laughing. Thanks for the comment.
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