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extremely twins

for peace we butcher the violent
their sad and forceful ways have
given us a new agenda for a hobby.

we shall bathe in blood and dwell in peace
screams are followed by silence and calm
proof of the serenity at the end of our path.

fire for purification and it screams
kill it more,and we do
screams not so loud now.
it moans in delirium
it is finding peace.
this makes us happy.

save the blood,save the blood.
when it has found peace
take the crimson liquid and naked
let us dance and express our joy
for someday all the world shall have such peace.

we are thanatose and eros and we are twins.
kill it,kill it and give it peace
see the humans fucking and it is boring
find the warriors and give them peace.
ignore the fuckers.
beautiful,dancing in the red liquids of peace.
give more ,give more,get more precious red fluid
for the dancing and the peace.
make it all good with fire
make it all good with fire.

dance and hear the peacebringing sounds of it's screams
screams ,screams and the calm that comes when they stop
just like a storms noise and conclusion
ahh the joyful sounds of peace in the making.
peace through blood and fire
peace,peace,peace
kill it more, it struggles
and we do.



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  • drkmisery1
    March 16, 2007

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    i dont think that i've ever scene a poem that was worded quite the same way... its very unique and very creative keep it coming


  • Bruised.Roses
    February 14, 2007

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    this was diferent...but yet good and had a nice twist...the wording was great and the flow was smooth...keep writting your great at it