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Times Have Changed

Time is the beginning or ending of something
I will never quite understand the whole thing
Minus all the hurts in ones past we only learn to grow
Eternally blest some of us may be but many are not.
Simple little words could hurt the most fragile person.

Having knowing that we are people with different needs
All we have to do is reach out to those need reaching
Very soon we will have not only a new pal but an everlasting friendship
Enveloping the every need that one could ever have.

Chances are people will not ask for friendship at times
Hunger may overtake their drive for such a thing
Anger may dwell up inside their lonely souls
Never withstanding the powers of greatness
Greatness is the Poet with rhyme or no rhyme at all but a free spirit
Enriching the very beings of our twisted souls.
Delving into the inner core of our being and challenging us forevermore.

Man, "Times Have Changed"

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  • Xero-Cool
    April 18, 2007
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    this is beautiful


  • PoeticWindstorms
    March 28, 2007
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    Well done and so true. Times do change, sometimes faster than I like though lol.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    March 27, 2007

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    so true

    things change, times change and life is so full of suprises
    nice version of yours to speak for us all..thanks so much for sharing mm


  • StevensFamilyPride
    February 13, 2007
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    thank you, it means alot to me


    • stormigrl
      February 13, 2007
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      Demon Lord

      Thanks for your comment. I see you liked it more than KateRomance did. She hates love and I guess she thought I was falling for you. But I'm happily married. I don't need anymore love than that. lol.
      I just care.

      Marianne


  • Queen Pooh Bah
    February 13, 2007
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    horrible

    this sucks.

    • stormigrl
      February 13, 2007
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      KateRomance

      You didn't get it, Its a rendition of several quotes put together and because Times Has Changed Ray doesn't like love I never wrote anything about love in it.
      sorry you didn't like it.
      Marianne.


  • Titus gold member
    February 13, 2007

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    Awesome write!

    Life seems life one horrendous challenge, I guess that's why they call it the will. and will it deed. A lovely concern of feeling have we here.

    • stormigrl
      February 13, 2007
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      Titus

      Thanks so much for your response. I wrote it for the poet "Times Has Changed" An Acrostic. **HUGS**
      Thanks a million Dad.
      Marianne

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