Dance with me
Dance with me, Marley
Make me forget that I
dance alone
red red lights
Marley pumps
his tightly strung harmony
body cannot hold
alone and red, red, red
shadow slides
across far wall
as if there were two
no counted
steps to meet
lighting hides age fine wine
feel feel change
hips push push push
reel and weave
loose limbed dance dance dance
with me against a shadowed wall
make me forget
real real alone
sweet sweet dance with you
there’s no wrong
this one thing make me recall
in dark dark dark
dance dance dance with me
sweet sweet memory yeah
Author notes
You can't hear it and not move. Listen to it and see if it does not move you,,,
http://www.esnips.com/doc/1ddf5519-2254-4de1-af63-a86bff51e554/Bob-Marley---Red-red-wine
Red Red Wine - Bob Marley
Red, red wine
Go to my head
Makes me forget that I
Still need her so
Red, red wine
It's up to you
All I can do, I've done
Memories won't go
Memories won't go
I'd have sworn
That with time
Thoughts of you
Would leave my head
I was wrong
Now I find
Just one thing makes me forget
Red, red wine
Stay close to me
Don't let me be alone
It's tearin' apart
My blue, blue heart
I'd have sworn
That with time
Thoughts of her
Would leave my head
I was wrong
And I find
Just one thing makes me forget
Red, red wine
Stay close to me
Don't let me be alone
It's tearin' apart
My blue, blue heart
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Red Red Wine Toast Section
Red red wine you make me feel so fine
You keep me rocking all of the time
Red red wine you make me feel so grand
I feel a million dollars when your just in my hand
Red red wine you make me feel so sad
Any time I see you go it make me feel bad
Red red wine you make me feel so fine
Monkey pack him rizla pon the sweet dep line
Red red wine you give me whole heap of zing
Whole heap of zing mek me do me own thing
Red red wine you really know how fi love
Your kind of loving like a blessing from above
Red red wine I love you right from the start
Right from the start with all of my heart
Red red wine in a 80's style
Red red wine in a modern beat style, yeah
Give me little time, help me clear up me mind
Give me little time, help me clear up me mind
Give me Red wine because it make me feel fine
Mek me feel fine all of the time
Red red wine you make me feel so fine
Monkey pack him rizla on the sweet dep line
The line broke, the monkey get choke
Burn bad ganja pon him little rowing boat
Red red wine I'm gonna hold on to you
Hold on to you cause I know you love true
Red red wine I'm gonna love you till I die
Love you till I die and that's no lie
Red red wine can't get you out my mind
Where ever you maybe I'll surely find
I'll surely find, make no fuss just stick with us.
Give me little time, help me clear up me mind
Give me little time, help me clear up me mind
Give me Red wine because it make me feel fine
Mek me feel fine all of the time
Red red wine you make me feel so fine
Monkey pack him rizla on the sweet dep line
The line broke, the monkey get choke
Burn bad ganja pon him little rowing boat
Red red wine you really know how fi love
Your kind of loving like a blessing from above
Red red wine I love you right from the start
Right from the start with all of my heart
Red red wine you give me whole heap of zing
Whole heap of zing mek me do me own thing
Red red wine in a 80's style
Red red wine in a modern beat style, yeah.
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A contest entry
- 12 Title Options. by Poetic Aphrodite.
450 points, ended February 15, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thankyou for your submittal, Bella
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GRRRRRAT SONG
I love it great flow!!!!! -
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thank you. I lsitened to the song over and over as I wrote it..happens it is one of my favorites.
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awesome
i love this song and i also really like yor peice you wrote beautiful and captures the feeling of being alone perfectly
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tks, he was a great musician.....they jsut do not compare the same in my life as back then.
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So true, listen to the rythym and you will find you dance without ever knowing you do it. Lovely write with great rhythm in it as well.
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ty cannonsfire. those were the days, my friend..I thought they'd never end....
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"shadow slides
across far wall
as if there were two"
Sighhh...Ahhh, my Sister...Why am I not surprised by this penning, this favorite song??? Gorgeous piece, Sweetie...I think it was Simply Red who also did a remake of it, if I'm not mistaken....I've always loved this song, too...It makes me dance even with two left, verrrrry large feet...
Good luck in the contest, my Friend...
Wanda
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those were the days we danced brefeet and it did not matter if you ahd room to move....but then.... in a room for one...only the big toe is in danger.
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