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I can feel it in the poison of your kiss

where do i begin?
- the poisonous bite of passion,
or the fermenting promise of everlasting love

that which has burned my soul into the false realization--
the sickening, crippling disease known for killing the most high-

Love-
and her sick pleasures.

why must i fool myself into thinking that which is not real?

he is not mine
nor shall i ever have him
he is nothing but a dream,
a dream that i hold to my damned, dying heart

a dream i will not give to the world

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  • Page Deleted
    December 5, 2007

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    this makes me think of student/teacher (i like one of my teachers)

    great write
    i am jealous of you talent


  • earthstar
    April 11, 2007
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    Many can relate to this work. In honset truth I am really glad it did work. I meant someone who love me so much more and gave so much of him to me.
    where do i begin?
    - the poisonous bite of passion,
    or the fermenting promise of everlasting love
    The mental images really spoke to me. I felt a little sad. Very well done