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dieing love

In the night





doves fly





In the distance






love dies

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    May 30, 2008
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    Wow this is somewhat mysterious . . . and sad but creative nonetheless. I enjoyed it.
    Brian


  • Ruby Petal
    March 21, 2007

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    *hugs* i haven't seen you in a while =/ is everything alright?
    and i love the poem. short and sweet (to me anyway). only 4 lines long, but the effect it gives me is great.

    Keep writing!