Am I so completly incomplete
Lost in all my dreams
Solitary confinment
Missunderstood
Gone for good
Momentarily broken
Screaming and scratching
Iching with this rashly
Bleeding but cant stop and...
How can I be so completly incomplete
And so lost in all my dreams
Stuck in solitary confinement
Shaking with chills
So im sick and ill
Can you give me will
Lost in my solitary confinement
Tears on my face
Pain I can taste
Im only a waste
Lost in my solitary confinement
Broken and lost
Without you im gone
Insane and all wrong
Now stuck forever
In my Solitary Confinement
A contest entry
- Options, Options, Options!!!!! U know u wana take a looky!! by ForgottenMemories.
550 points, ended May 25, 2007, 44 entries
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Your writings always take me somewhere fascinating, and you do it so well without even trying too hard it seems. I cant wait to see you (MaYbE) but if not its okay and I'll still love you <3
I must say that this is really catchy ya know and I like the on and off rhyming nicely done kinda follows some of my patterns, i like.
"Shaking with chills
So im sick and ill
Can you give me will
Lost in my solitary confinement
Tears on my face
Pain I can taste
Im only a waste"
That was kool, I like how you did that lyric like almost. Nice work!
Chris
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