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sweat pea

i love the way you look at me
baby your my lil sweat pea
i love the way your eyes go wide
when you see all the tears that i have cried

i love the way your arms wrap tight
feels like being with you is right
i love the way my love is intack
but what i love the most, is that you love my back

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  • Lj-
    February 14, 2007
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    This is good. I enjoyed reading it.


    thank you for your entry.
    Good luck!