I am broken gem
I am bent branch
I am merely bonsai
To that I meant to be
Supposing I handed my heart back
Would you recognize it
In it’s new hard shape
Blackened important edges
Useless to anyone anymore
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I don't like that you don't say I am A broken gem and so on in the other lines. I feel a little proper grammar from the start should have been added. It had a nice conclusion. I just wish it had been longer.
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Speaks to me of being poorly loved by a thoughtless person. Now feeling dry and useless. Sad emotive poem. Even the question, "Would you recognize it?" seems to expect no answer. So sad. Peace, Rhonda
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