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The Start Of My Ending

The rain keeps falling
My thoughts are surrounding me
This darkness keeps calling
And I don't know what to do

So help me, Help me survive
Because I am struggling
To keep my head above water
Help me survive, because...

This is the end of my begining
And the start of my ending
And I can feel myself fade
Fade, into the deep abyss of my soul

Can't you see I want my space
Back off and leave me be
My tears droping
This heart of mine has a key
But you through it away
And now no one can get in

So help me, Help me love
Because I am struggling
To re-open my heart to you
Help me love, because...

This is the end of my begining
And the start of my ending
And I can feel myself fade
Fade, into the deep abyss of my soul

This life I live
Is not for me
I cannot go through it easily
But then again, who said life wasn't hard
And even though it is unfair that for some
Everything is handed to them
We have to suffer for the ones we love

So help me, Help me live 
Because I am struggling
To live this life just for you
Help me live, because...

This is the end of my begining
And the start of my ending
And I can feel myself fade
Fade, into the deep abyss of my soul

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  • ourgirlFriday
    May 12, 2008
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    Interesting...

    A twist on Option 2 (if I'm correct, and if so you need to put this in your author's notes for the contest. Instead of every new beginning is another's end, you seem to reverse the flow to the beginning of the end. I'm not quite sure what to make of this piece, but it will probably come to me in time. Again,
    PLEASE NOTE WHICH OPTION YOU'RE USING.