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He'll never leave.

As numbness courses through her veins,
Then through her bones and body.
Her heart beating slower,
She holds her chest trying to breathe.

Tears of pain slowly slide down her pale face,
She falls to the floor.
No one bothers to help her out,
Because of she dresses and acts.
No one even knows her,
She's been acting her emotions for so long.

She tries to get up but she falls.
People stop then shake their head;continuing walking,
No one bothers to help her out.
The people she thought were friends,
Abanded her;they were to busy with their someone.
She bows her head;fist clenched,
She gets up with support of a wall and runs.
She ignores the fact that tears are running with her,
She trips and falls on the ground crying.
Not caring that people are whispering about her,
They already made her life Hell.

She gets up ignoring that her pants are ripped,
Her knees bruised and bleeding.
She winces as her tears hit the cuts,
No one; not even the nicest people help her,
She just stays on the ground crying and bleeding.

She watches her friends smiling ,
Laughing with their loved ones.
They don't notice her on the floor.

She gets up and limps her way out,
The coldness gives her chills.
The cold air freezes her tears,
Her cut slowly drying.
Her hair a mess and tangled from running and crying.
She sits on a cold snowed bench holding herself,
Looking up in the clouded sky,
Tears slowly sliding down her frozen face.

She feels her heart beat slower,
Those once emotions she felt;gone.
She knew she was meant to be alone,
She told them and they said they never will.
She was right...;she is meant to be alone,
She thinks of the three deadly words that kills everytime.
"I love you" whispers in her ear,
Giving her a spine shiver.
She turns around and she see's him,
She gets up and hugs him; not letting go.
"I'll never leave you" is whispered again,
She smiles softly;glad he won't judge her,
Won't leave her alone and in pain.

Bella Knoll
7:07pm 2/13/07

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  • RainbowSky
    September 1, 2008
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    loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it

  • OurxBeginning
    May 24, 2007

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    A lot of emotion is in this, and the reader can feel it all. Quite long but deep and powerful. Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • rosepoet
    February 23, 2007

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    great Job

    This poem is touching and speaks alot of emotion.
    I sure many can relate to this poem.
    keep the ink flowing. good luck in the contest.


  • CrimsonxxMachete
    February 15, 2007
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    This was great and sad. It kinda reminds me of myself....Keep it up.
    Love,
    marisa


  • willowprincess
    February 13, 2007

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    this was amazing and so sad. unfortunately it reminds me so much of myself. but i love the hope at the end. i'm glad that you have someone to stand by you. two friends of mine are now showing me the same thing, tat they will never leave.
    i hope that you will keep going and someday this will be nothing but a memory.


  • xSpirax
    February 13, 2007
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    It brought tears to my eyes

    Sis, this poem....Omg I'm speechless. It's amazing. I love it..So sad and yet....I can tell that you still have hope. That sounds like something he would do, too. I hope that it all works out for you...

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