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Memories.

Its wierd how just
a couple of words
can trigger that one specific
memory of us

I'm sad now
cause it won't go away
the memory of us
I miss it

I miss those two days
that we spent together
when you were sweet
and actually liked me

Just two days,
out of 4 months
wow is all I got to say
What the hell was I thinking?

Those two days were
even before we started going out
What was I thinking?
God I'm stupid

I should of never said yes
but I did
and I can't turn back time
all well

I still miss those two days though
I use to love those memories
now I hate them
they make me sad and mad at the same time

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Yeah...the poem basically explains it all.

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  • Blissful Melody
    March 11, 2007

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    Wow what a story you tell here. This is so heartbreakingly real.. Friends who start dating and aren't friends anymore..Classic and painful.. I hope it gets better for you hun..

    Nikido


  • Kurtis and Trista
    February 26, 2007

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    I should of never said yes
    but I did
    and I can't turn back time
    all well

    I still miss those two days though
    I use to love those memories
    now I hate them
    they make me sad and mad at the same time

    Once again, good poem. I really like how you put your words together. I really like this one as well. You and I write about the same shit. lol. Sweet someone to talk too. finally.
    Trista

  • Heavenly Star
    February 20, 2007

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    An emotional write you penned here, don't feel like you did it all for nothing there was a reason you gave your heart away just remember that. Well written dear poet


  • Frankenchrist
    February 15, 2007

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    As the sands of time slowly sift through my fingers I find that more and more things trigger those lost trials of my life that I found challenging and trivial in my life and I now cherish.

    It brings pain to think the life I once knew as hard to live are the greatest memories of my life and the feelings I held back, the things I did not do because I feared judgement from my peers are my biggest regrets.

    Live life to the fullest, let not judgement control the path in which you follow. Do not lead your life on anothers moral beliefs...


    If you heed my warning then maybe one day you will look back on life and not regret the things you have not done but look back and say "I really Lived life".

    Live fast die young!

    Frankenchrist.


  • xXRawerxX
    February 13, 2007
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    Love the poem hun. U miss him..huh? I remember when u told me that he touched ur butt n all this and u were freakin out cause u didn't like him. then u dated him.*hugs* Be happy hun. I love ya tons.

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