I would buy a bed of roses
up and down the courtyard square
circle you while it decomposes
but Mr. Muggle loves you more
I would buy a diamond ring
fourteen carot just for you
twist and push the jagged thing
but mr. muggle loves you more
I would buy perfumes of pleasent scent
choke the bottle by it's neck
pray your gasping is not torment
but Mr. Muggle loves you more
Buy you a knife, with which to cut
names engraved on the blade's side
and with sweet passion slice into your gut
but Mr. Muggle loves you more
He loves the way you lay quite still
and never say a peep
Never break the window sill
while walking in your sleep
and how your soul does never fright
even as those nasty ground worms bite
I would release you from the floor
but Mr. Muggle loves you more
Author notes
I really liked writing this one, thank you for the opportunity
A contest entry
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Comments
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I'm not sure whether this is meant to have the effect it had on me - giggles, then horror that I'm laughing when it's actually quite sad. Nicely done, though, and some good rhyming.
Thankyou for entering and good luck in my contest.
Katie -
Yeaaaah
This has all of the elements I asked for and is very well written. I liked the flow, and I'm kinda scared of you now...lol. GOOD JOB!
Good lck in my contest!
Love and Peace, Charlene
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