As my thoughts soar like spring butterflies
A sheer picture of you appears as I day dream
Life's fragrance enters my pores like morning dew
and refreshes my soul with the liberty to love
This moment that is ours and ours alone
is prestige like the rainbow of different aspects
It gives us meaning and purpose to pursuit happiness
Beyond the mystery of love of what can only be felt
like a silent waves caressings its shore
My heart is massaged by your amorous love.
A contest entry
- a place to put some pre-loved poems. by DancingRed.
300 points, ended May 20, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - You Are The Key To My Heart. by Poetryintheblood.
575 points, ended December 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for your most beautifully expressed write, Josie
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Life's fragrance enters my pores like morning dew
and refreshes my soul with the liberty to love
I loved those lines the best in this piece. -
"the liberty to love" - I like that line. I'm not sure why, but it filled me with the most lovely feeling.
Great choice of ending line, too. The metaphors are simply beautiful.
Thanks so much for entering.
DancingRed.
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Life's fragrance enters my pores like morning dew
and refreshes my soul with the liberty to love
is prestige like the rainbow of different aspects
It gives us meaning and purpose to pursuit happiness
Very very creative
this poem also ws very honest in the way you write
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This is so beautiful. You have a knack for romantic poetry. Congrats in winning my contest!
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good write,I enjoyed the visual of morning emotions rolling in the breeze.Thank you for entering
God Bless
~Cheryl~ -
the love reflecting through the morning dew ,the butterflies and the rainbow caresses me also...
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