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the lake bed(haiku)

Your breath shakes blossoms,
grows paper lillies, drifting
river in my heart

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good opportunity to make a nice short love poem. I love the Haiku form, how it allows content to flow.

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  • Seven Aziz
    February 13, 2007
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    THIS WAS LOVELY!

    Jay