Your breath shakes blossoms,
grows paper lillies, drifting
river in my heart
Author notes
good opportunity to make a nice short love poem. I love the Haiku form, how it allows content to flow.
A contest entry
- Vivid Valentine's Day Japanese Poetry by Seven Aziz.
600 points, ended February 13, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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THIS WAS LOVELY!
Jay


