Hanging with wild aunties
I dance for you
an Irish jig transformed
like hoochie mammas who
shake bootie I adorn.
One aunt like me
born across the tracks
another Black and she
is educated, all that.
People say my soul
is Black Irish type
because I feel whole
jiving my Celtic hype.
You give me spice
and totally open love
and sometimes your advice
seems more like shoves.
I love my aunts
two damn sexy broads
one whose boyfriend taunts
the other Hot Lord.
So for two aunties
I give Pixie spins
jumping out my panties
while one spectator grins.
You are both miracles
every word I spew
magical, mysterious and intractable
is me loving you.
You say trust him
you know his name
as if by whim
I could just change.
If I opened up
and looked into you,
I'd find two cups
of Southern Mountain Dew.
One sip, I'm high
loose inside my skirt
showing too much thigh
until urban cowgirl hurts.
Iohagh
Janet McCall
Author notes
Dear aunties
Auntie FineBrownSmoke and Sacrificial Lov and I have a nice time reading each other's stuff and loving each other as Pixies do, so there, a collaboration. Smoosh
Janet
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Excellent
Love this poem. So Irish American. Very nice job on this, truly. Bob
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good
you can dress up your aunties but just can't take them out i always run in the other direction for that is safer keep doing well
love the papa -
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sounds like the aunts have it dear lohagh. How you been? I went back to school, college that is? Been absent but missing words scripted by you. Nothing interesting about the child slavery huh?
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This piece makes my heart feel all warm and squishy.
here for you is a really big Smooshie.
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Darling Janet, charming pixie,
It was really a sweet poem and I’m sure it brought smiles of joy to your aunties’ lips. Unfortunately I don’t know them but I know goodness is inside you and then you see everyone good. Stay spilling your ink since it is a source of happiness to your friends and family members. And also a special thank-you for messaging me on this. It’s always a pleasure to read your works, my friend
and smooshes
~Massy~
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I Really Liked Your Poem It Wash Abit Funny, I Actually Love It. You Sound Like Your A Funny Person.
Very Great Poem.
And Of Course You Get 3 Hands Up
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I am unable to tell who wrote which verse. That makes for a totally great collaboration. Sounds like you and your pixie aunties have a blast together. That's alway a good thing. This is whimsical and fun to read. I applaud the three of you on a job exceedingly well done.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Hilarious.
Thoroughly enjoyable and entertaining in your own way with words...I loved the final line!!!
Woosh! Got a sore tush! Smoosh!
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lol good job girls
love the bluntness of your post..keep sharing Linda
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this is great & i love the way you've written it. i also lyk the picture you used.
--Blessed be--
Bradhadair
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Sweetie
I hope you signed my valentine, smooshies
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"an Irish jig transformed like hoochie mammas"
As dancing wicked and witchy, ye spin a lines through my mind of trinity, full moons space of scribbles well formed and wild pants the fun as, any pointed ear friend and forrest would smile, like great pipes and great tunes around a fire, and so as free as the wind I thank ye skipping around a mushroom
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lol, you know it is sometimes family that is werider then we think, i think your aunts are two cool ladies, you did a great job honoring them keep it flowing
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Very sexy, fun, wild and creative!
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Great job ladies
has visual and audible rhyming, not easy, lots of informal language, which is always fun, kinda sexy from my perspective, quatrain formed which adds strength and to be honest, nary could I tell where one left off and the other began.
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I like It
Dancing with you anties
To a celtic beat
Much swinging of bodies
And stamping of feet
Magic woven in your words
As you move in dance
Still perhaps it might be cold
To jump right out your pants
I liked this poem, smoosh darling Janet, love John
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Nice rhythem and rhyme.--I liked it!
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haha.. i love this... great job once more.. i love your writes so much.. check you out later..
Laters
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ya gotta love em, but watch the urban cowgirl blues
You say trust him
you know his name
as if by whim
I could just change.
If I opened up
and looked into you,
I'd find two cups
of Southern Mountain Dew.
One sip, I'm high
loose inside my skirt
showing too much thigh
until urban cowgirl hurts.
they're just telling you, you need to get out more, you must practice it every day, and they are right you can trust him, trust him to be not trustable, and then he becomes transparent, and it the nights are too wild or you feel out of place, practice and may be it will be a whole new adventure, this poem could titled learning the only way it is learned. ,,,Danni
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You amaze me again...
Janet you never cease to amaze me with your writing that is both original and fresh yet, is familiar and comforting. This poem is a sheer pleasure and contain beautiful imagery for the female form in unashamed glory.
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Sounds like lots of fun... But maybe a bit too racey? Yupyup, the virgin fourteen-year-old mind...
Cassie
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Yup
You need another four to seven years before you hang with wild aunties. Hey, I might be one by then. LOL Smooshies. -
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Maybe! Smoosh!
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i like the mountain dew thing in here., i just have to figur out how to trust anyone, an aunt, sister, man... this is a nice write to your aunties. viyanna rosemarie
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You don't trust me, wow,
Darling Sis Vi
I'm the screwy one
not you sister friend
All girls meet bums
we sometimes take in.
Who is more nuts
I'll wager you dice
for this girl's ruts
are not very nice.
They lied and then
betrayed, dismayed and bamboozled
downright took boyfriend stolen
making me so confuzzled.
I haven't been beat
though my daddy pimped
I guess both feats
are about equally limp.
I see you better
than most other girls
Your eyes somewhat wetter
because of the world.
Smooshies
Janet
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This is a wonderful collaboration of friends who encourage and urge each other on to write better - to reach beyond ability and grasp for stars - you are lucky to have such poets in your life and i am sure you are a better person because of their influence. I found this a bit too warm for me, having to find an open window and a cool breeze.
Blessings and best wishes, ~richard
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sensual and sweet...awesome love!!!
luv
J
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lmao that was pretty darn funny Iohagh! a little dirty minded in the way it sounds but hey that just makes sound funnier lol keep up the excellent work
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If I opened up
and looked into you,
I'd find two cups
of Southern Mountain Dew
this is a great write... it draws you into it... i love this verse just has a great flow to it... well done and good luck withyour aunties and their loving shoves..
cheers
Jen
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Lovely quantrain with a structured abab rhyme scheme, I loved the way it flowed with good meter. Your emotional image is clear and vivid filled with love. Nice write. Amera
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Pixes in a circle like a corral...
Peace
You run faster than
steeds upon the wind
outdistancing your admiring fans
partying within sacred glens.
Peace
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
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Excellent!
O, this one is so fun! Your aunties sound like exceptionally fun people.
Lovin' this stanza, sweets:
"People say my soul
is Black Irish type
because I feel whole
jiving my Celtic hype."
Entire last stanza was awfully fun as well. Great job, darl. Can't wait for a spare moment to read your aunts' stuff.
Love you, hunny.
Allura
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Beauriful
This is a great. Beautifully written and filled with love.
Great job.
*Go with God*
Valerie
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So for two aunties
I give Pixie spins
jumping out my panties
while one spectator grins.
???????? I suspect it would far more than one spectator!LOL! medic!
yes indeed you have Hoochie Koochie Aunties
with wild silk and Nomex panties
now, this part was sweet;
If I opened up
and looked into you,
I'd find two cups
of Southern Mountain Dew.
I know a couple of dear friends like that but of them I'd have to say;
When I opened my eyes
and looked into thee
Found two heartfelt sighs
And now all three are we
However...you know my bizzare ass life!
and yes you did an especially sweet and revealing write here Janet, One that you could not have done as early as last fall. thus, I have to smile my smile.
Dad
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A PLEASANT READ
A beautiful write on your part that shows much promises on your ability to improvise with poetic forms.It is also a pleasant read on my part lol.
NICE WRITE JANET!!!
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Sassy
And ohhh so chic
dang girl
this piece
is the flick
on the Bic
You do so well
what girls
love to do
so for the smile
Smooshes to you
Much love...Dusty
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your aunties should be proud
to be displayed like that with humor and love and sexy attitude...so enjoyable to read..thank you
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woooooohooooooo
This is fantastic!!!
very seductive and full of class!
sexy and cut, and it has a certain style no other could give to it!!
you blow me away girl!
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Wonderful!!! I really enjoyed this write!! Cute and Sexy... Shake what your auntie gave ya!!
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Daaaaaaaaang....
Which sexy shut-yo-mouth's up there is supposed to be me???
Daaaaaaaaaang M...we're kinda sexy eh????
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WOOOOOOOO....
I'm damn near in tears over here ladybug...lmao...
This is too sweet...and I'm lovin' it ALL...
We both love you bunches...I think a girl's night rendezvous is in order but uhhhhhh... it can't be in NY...I have a no touch order in that state...
LOL
smooshies galore for you love
xoxo
Auntie Hotpants...
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No You Didn't *lol*
This is too cute. I love it! Are you kidding you know this gon' be on my front page. Thank you sweetie I'm almost speechless...almost *lol*. You got me blushing all over (glad ya'll can't see this).
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Well aunties surprise, surprise, surprise
I hope you like it. Smooshies
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