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[ I love you Father ]

I love you Father
You are my life
For me you offered
You'r Son to die
It wasn't that
I deserved a thing!
No goodness had I
No righteous deeds
Just wretched rags
and nakedness
I could'nt walk
I could'nt sing
Your love reached down
and washed me clean
I love you Father
I worship Thee
You are my God
My Savior and King!
You are so worthy
of all my praise
My heart
My mind
My soul
My days
I lift you high
above all else
I love you God
I love your face!
You are my all
My joy
My might
I'll shout it
from the mountain's height!
With all my soul
I bless your name
and all my love
to you proclaim!

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  • Samplette gold member
    February 24, 2007

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    wow...this is so beautiful. all of the poems have been WOW"S. I thank you for entering the contest. :fSam


  • Quiet places
    February 14, 2007

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    Sensational

    Annette! This is one of the most uplifting and spirit filling poems I have had the pleasure to read. Excellent Job! Now I know what your special gift is for. I will send you some pics on this subject. You have such an inspiring write here with the imagery and emotion at the top of any list. I am Proud Of you. Your friend, Don


    • Justified Inc.
      February 14, 2007
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      Thankyou big brother! Maybe you are right?
      He is my inspiration!
      luvs,
      castaway


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 13, 2007

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    Wonderful!

    I really enjoyed this. Nice form and it flowed well I think, and, the message was the best part. Bravo sir!


    • Justified Inc.
      February 13, 2007
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      Thankyou Mighty!
      So does this mean I have the law on my side?
      ha ha just kidding with ya!
      castaway


  • rollingzen
    February 13, 2007
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    tell me, what does the face of 'God' look like?


    • Justified Inc.
      February 13, 2007
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      Beauty beyond comprehension through the eyes of His Spirit living within me!
      thanks for stopping by rollingzen!
      God Bless,
      Annette

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