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famine

darling little fiend
take your friends and kindly leave
you have eaten your fill
and have nothing left to kill
so leave us please
and stop spreading your disease
we are dwindling in number
and cannot take this summer
with you killing our kin
so leave this place and never return again

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yeah...it's not the greatest, but i like it...

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  • denika
    February 13, 2007
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    i like it too...
    short and simple is sometimes the best...
    nice write