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all in your head

it's all.in.your.head
just because you hear
      a cat meow
      a door slam
      a man speak
doesn't mean it's there.


because you know you're losing it
when you see things
that no-one else can see
but you're not.insane
and it's all in your head.

just because you're home alone
and your music's not loud enough to block it out
and your eyes keep wondering from the screen


never believe it.

never
    be
      lieve
            it.

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Blehh.

This brain sucks.

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  • makeout kid
    February 13, 2007

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    just because you're home alone
    and your music's not loud enough to block it out
    and your eyes keep wondering from the screen

    i liked that.
    && i know the feeling.


  • sweetpearl
    February 13, 2007

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    Sometimes I wish we could unscrew our head and open our skull see what piece of our brain has come unhooked and then fix it up ... see if it makes any difference or if we've just lost it completely.

    "just because you're home alone
    and your music's not loud enough to block it out"

    --sometimes my music is so loud I wonder how I can hear other sounds, but I do. I've thought that I was going crazy a few times. Actually, I've had some paranormal experiences that have made me believe so. I don't know ... I suppose we all lose it sometimes. The mind likes to play tricks on us ... after all, it can't be put in a straitjacket but it can put you in one. If that makes any sense

    BUT after all that ... I still believe it, *sigh*


    • ohemeegeeay
      February 13, 2007
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      It does make sense. It makes a lot of sense.

      Noise&&Kisses


  • dead inside an out
    February 13, 2007
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    Nice

    I realy like it. Good job.

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