we all fall in love
we all have pain
i think pain is becuase of love
and love is becuase of pain
why should we love if it's gonna end up in pain?
how do we get rid of the pain so we can stop loveing?
what is pain?
what is love?
love, it is a sacred thing
pain, follows love forever
well love is a heart filling thing
pain is a heart breaking thing that will be there forever
are we strog enough to take the pain after loveing someone?
is there enough pain to make us stop loveing?
why should we take the pain after just to be wit someone
is there a way to get to stop the pain after being in love?
Author notes
eh what can i say it was what was on my mind and it kinda all i write about which is love,pain,and death
A contest entry
- Fly Away With Me! by whispernthedark.
795 points, ended January 19, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
well what do u think i don't know if ur looking for this type or my poems but here ya go
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Not really what i was looking for dear! I can appreciate your love and pain theory tho!
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This is a very nice piece although you have a couple of typos. It should be "loving" & "because". I agree with your message. Thank you for sharing and entering the contest.
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whisper
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amazing. . .
its amazing how you can point out some of the things that the rest of the world tries to ignore. i love how you can point these out it truely is amazing. -
Bleh.
its so true..this reminds me of the song "pain" by three days grace which is an awesome band && my new obcession so woot! -
i like this one better
you make it sound like you have experienced this before. i like this version better. You can get into and its not so short.
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It does pose some interesting questions on the topic of love and I could most probably give my opinion on most on them
In terms of this contest you have exceeded the 10 line limit rule and therefore cannot be considered for finals. As I am a forgiving person if you can rewrite this piece to make it fit into the perimeters of the contest I will allow it.
Good luck - let the ink flow and your fingers dance
Rosemary
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