Life holds my little secret
She cradles it in her arms
Never letting the world see
I let you into my little world
Under the impression that you knew
That I would never love you
Against my better judgment
I slept with you
Knowing that I was leading you on
When news of your "death" reached my ears
I was overjoyed; I was free
But I had to know how you died
So now I stand over looking your body
You look so peaceful
An Angel on her way to heaven
HA You were no angel
You lied to the world
But they will never know that
The point of my blade lays on you throat
Too bad you're not awake to see me
If you could you would see what you thought you loved
I wait until I see you eyes
Flutter and come too life
Now I will have some fun
You wake only to scream out
Your last breathe escapes through
Your new hole in your neck
I smile at you and kiss
You for the last time
"Good-Bye my deceiving Angel."
With blood on my lips
And a dagger in my hand
I head out into the night
My freedom
Had such a sweet tasting price
Your blood; Your death
Author notes
Option 2. I never really liked Romeo and Juliet. I think that only one of them should have died not both. Oh well.
'Sucks to your ass-mar!'
A contest entry
- Choose Your Fate! by AislinnAurora.
525 points, ended February 25, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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that was disturbing and funny and i like this new twist on it all
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Me and Jez both agree; great job! It's a very interesting read, and it captured our attention at once, even with Jez's short attention span! It was exactly what we were looking for in that option!
Great job and good luck!
<3 Aislinn and Jezabel
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Thank you!?! ^_^ I am glad that you liked it.
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Couple spelling errors:
Under the [impression] that you knew
Against my better [judgment]
"Good-Bye my [deceiving] Angel."
Wonderful imagery. You chose your words well giving me a different view on the lovers.
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Thank you for pointing out my mistakes. ^_^
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wonderful
I find i have been on both the giving and receiving end of that. Marvelously done! -
I loved your creative imagery. Your carefully chosen words painted a picture as I read your poetic work of art. I am glad I read it. thanks for sharing. Keep up the great work. Best of wishes to you. good luck in all that you do....peace always in all ways.
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Thank you for taking the time to read it.
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