Another promise broken,
so many words left unspoken
I didn't mean to lie,
And I didn't want to make you cry
But I broke my promise and I broke your heart,
Even after our love's gone so far
Another 'Believe' means another cheat
Another "Lie' means more heartache for me
Mistakes I have made,
and our lives will go unsaved
All of this hurt just because of me
A fragile heart begins to slowly bleed
I just don't deserve to be with someone like you
I think our love should just be through
You deserve so much better,
I made a promise of "Forever',
But that promise is never
Because now we aren't together
Author notes
I was lying to my current girlfriend at that time and i wasnt telling her the truth about how i felt and what i did behind her back. AP name = bloody-romance
A contest entry
- Broken promisses... by Wolf Mistress.
1200 points, ended February 23, 2008, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow...I think you did a great job here, I read a lot from people on the other side of the broken promises...but yours made me see how the mind of the "braker" works and writes
I liked your poem a lot
I do hope your girlfriend is doing okay and so are you???
Good luck in my contest
XXJeannette
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Please read the rules...
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sorry about that, i didnt notice that rule. i changed it, thanx for giving second chances unlike other people
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This is really good, I like the scatter rhyme- nice touch to a heartfelt poem. I like all of your arguments with this person as to why you can't be together. Thank you for sharing this.
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aww
i like this one a lot, and i know the expression that came through when u wrote this. you've always had an incredible ability to rhyme really well justin, i love it, keep writing. =] <3 -
WOW!! really good. I mean in a good way. but i hope ut o.k
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ummm i like this poem but what is the story behind this?
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....deep inside hurt and guilt builds and I just want to let go of everything......sorry.....
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